User contributions for A Shortfall Of Gravitas
A user with 553 edits. Account created on 23 March 2018.
18 July 2024
- 17:4617:46, 18 July 2024 diff hist +652 User talk:A Shortfall Of Gravitas →Reference errors in Dicopper chloride trihydroxide: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 17:4317:43, 18 July 2024 diff hist −2,277 Dicopper chloride trihydroxide Cleanup leftover references to deleted stacked reference chain mess of webminerology, with 4 URLs in a single ref tag, and then their individual references copied out into multiple references in other ref tags and used to give... weight to all of this I guess? Push the extensive minerology stuff to the end of the page; this is a chemical page and the lede states the industrial form is a purified product. Prune 99% of the 20,000 farm nutrition refs. Farming resources exist for heifer vs steer
- 16:4316:43, 18 July 2024 diff hist −1,000 Dicopper chloride trihydroxide →Natural occurrence: Remove hideous mess of 4 PDF references to minerals, then another to web pages, yet still more to various articles clumped under single ref tags and not really adding anything to this article. Turn the other references into proper references. If you really need to reference every mineral in existence, narrow down the links more and provide quotes, and don't just copy references from references. We barely need single refs per type with the mineral pages linked on wiki
- 16:0516:05, 18 July 2024 diff hist +1,325 Dicopper chloride trihydroxide →As a catalyst: Change the citations in this section from sad wooden puppets to real boys, thanks to the miracle of 5 minutes on google and reverse-lookup of DOI / PMID to fill in info on wikipedia. Hint hint.
17 July 2024
- 12:4012:40, 17 July 2024 diff hist −4 Sodium peroxide →Uses: Sodium peroxoborate->sodium perborate, plural->singular current
15 July 2024
- 19:5419:54, 15 July 2024 diff hist −143 Deschloroketamine →History: Remove "history" because what was there said absolutely nothing. What is Caulredaitens? Google isn't saying. More importantly, why should I care? Were there any results? current
- 03:5403:54, 15 July 2024 diff hist +702 Talk:John G. Trump →Doctorate: Reply current Tag: Reply
14 July 2024
- 02:0402:04, 14 July 2024 diff hist +1,204 Talk:Magnesium injection cycle →Efficiency?: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 01:5401:54, 14 July 2024 diff hist +2,938 Talk:Magnesium injection cycle →How does it work ?: Reply Tag: Reply
4 July 2024
- 13:1413:14, 4 July 2024 diff hist +63 Explosion →Nuclear: unreferenced section current
- 13:1313:13, 4 July 2024 diff hist +122 Explosion →Mechanical and vapor: unreferenced section
- 13:1213:12, 4 July 2024 diff hist +117 Explosion →Electrical and magnetic: unreferenced section tag
- 13:0913:09, 4 July 2024 diff hist +107 Explosion →Chemical: Unreferenced section tag
- 13:0213:02, 4 July 2024 diff hist −73 Plutonium-239 Remove more multiply-used wikilinks
- 12:4912:49, 4 July 2024 diff hist −283 Plutonium-239 →Production: Remove extraneous wikilinks, don't link to different sections of the same page 5 times, don't link to the same page 2.7 trillion times in the same article; assume readers aren't lobotomized gerbils and will click the first one if they don't know the term. Citation tags.
- 12:1412:14, 4 July 2024 diff hist −6 RBMK Remove completely nonsensical "of which". Of which *what*?
- 11:4211:42, 4 July 2024 diff hist +7 Diacetyl peroxide →Safety: Change contact with liquid causes irritation of eyes and skin... to "the exposed area", because I doubt spilling it on my toe will irritate my eyes much. current
22 June 2024
- 19:1119:11, 22 June 2024 diff hist −1,677 Magnetic pulse welding Removed "advantages" list because it was copyvio from a manufacturer advertisement page which used to be reference 2. Deleted said reference because it didn't contain information about the section it was in. Remove disadvantages list because it wasn't cited at all (and we don't need pros and cons of everything in the world). Remove some pointless commas.
- 18:4518:45, 22 June 2024 diff hist +4,151 Talk:Magnetic pulse welding →Removing Advantages of MPW - Green process section...: new section current Tag: New topic
- 06:3306:33, 22 June 2024 diff hist −7 Verlet integration →Velocity Verlet: Remove pointless comma, debold current
3 June 2024
- 11:5711:57, 3 June 2024 diff hist −3,876 The Delicious One Removed the long and mostly unsourced list of commercials because A) Nobody, and I mean nobody, cares about the specifics of this, it's like the huge lists of all comic book appearances in every Marvel character article B) lists like that are discouraged anyway. Put a "better source needed" on the only remaining source, because it's a business press release dump albeit a dead one.
31 May 2024
- 06:1906:19, 31 May 2024 diff hist −6,170 Gen V →Critical response: Gaming sites barely have enough competence to review videogames (or wipe), but their marketing teams have enough competence to spam wiki cross-links to their pages here and to their clickbait, pointless articles. "Den of Geek" appears comic-oriented and on more solid ground to review a comic based series... The last sentence (was) an obvious crapflood to sneak multiple "top" list articles in. Top 50 TV shows? What an difficult task that list must have been! Tag: Reverted
28 May 2024
- 14:4314:43, 28 May 2024 diff hist −216 Zinc chloride If no mineral source is known but one which, in fact, isn't zinc chloride, one might better state that fact as "No mineral source is known" or just not state the non-fact at all. Deliquescensce implies hygroscopic. We don't say "Tom is the name of a person", we say "Tom is a person". Remove psychotic levels of wiki-linking from a bit of it.
27 May 2024
- 18:0018:00, 27 May 2024 diff hist +143 Talk:Tears of Steel →Vandalism: Reply current Tag: Reply
20 May 2024
- 02:2702:27, 20 May 2024 diff hist +163 M15 mine →Fuzes: Clarify what the bhodian.com link is a cite for more by adding a cleanup tag. Mention demoltion of the M600s remaining (same source). De-wikilink things like "truck" and repetitions of "detonate". Attribute false sense of security to tank operator, not the tank itself.
17 May 2024
- 15:5215:52, 17 May 2024 diff hist +488 Talk:Asymmetric numeral systems →How did Microsoft possibly get this patent? current
- 15:4715:47, 17 May 2024 diff hist +689 Talk:Asymmetric numeral systems →uABS implementation
- 11:0911:09, 17 May 2024 diff hist +1,446 Bacteriophage →Phage therapy: Move orphan paragraph to where it might have belonged. Since the paragraph was nearly unintelligible broken English anyway, extensively rewrite the paragraph portraying the 2017 phage treatment as a miracle cure; it was incredibly dicey and still required antibiotics. Probably needs attention from a med person, I've read so much heavily obfuscated assembly language that medical journals are light reads and my take was "needs extensive further study", not "new magic bullet"
- 00:3200:32, 17 May 2024 diff hist +216 Talk:Atomic force microscopy →References current
- 00:2900:29, 17 May 2024 diff hist +910 Talk:Atomic force microscopy →References: Reply Tag: Reply
- 00:2200:22, 17 May 2024 diff hist +205 Talk:Atomic force microscopy →Force
- 00:1800:18, 17 May 2024 diff hist −173 Atomic force microscopy Remove more wikilinks to cantilever, we don't need to redefine "scanning probe microscopy" as SPM and wikilink it 10 times, linking nanometer is excessive for anyone capable of reading this article, some grammar
16 May 2024
- 23:5423:54, 16 May 2024 diff hist +10 Atomic force microscopy →Probe: Make more better English and remove the 5 extraneous links to "cantilever"
- 23:4923:49, 16 May 2024 diff hist +20 Atomic force microscopy →Identification of individual surface atoms: Science isn't a "trick". If it was it would be magic. Tried to phrase the sentence with "incipient" a little better, that word doesn't seem to sit well there. Fix Dr. Evil "finger quotes". Stick the cite on paragraph two as well and ditch the reference to "the team" which doesn't make any sense since no team is mentioned elsewhere. Tense nitpicking since this was a published paper
- 02:1102:11, 16 May 2024 diff hist −529 Spectacles (product) →Software: Remove terrible puff piece press release "news" articles. HERE'S HOW TO PAIR A BLUETOOTH THING. Here's how to go away. Dubious tags on snap's odd perception of human vision, which I'm sure is approved fully by Dr. Nick Riviera.
- 02:1102:11, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2,154 Talk:Spectacles (product) →see an optometrist immediately if your vision resembles what Snap Inc believes the human field of view looks like: new section current Tag: New topic
15 May 2024
- 16:4016:40, 15 May 2024 diff hist −37 Arsine →Thermal decomposition: Simplify chemistry with chem2 template current
- 16:1516:15, 15 May 2024 diff hist +22 HCN →Science and mathematics: Remove "HCN ?" and stick the chemical formula next to hydrogen cyanide current
6 May 2024
- 18:3918:39, 6 May 2024 diff hist +152 Neoprene →Precautions: Clarify tag on allergy / dermatitis, reasonably certain the allergy is caused by the accelerator impurity and allergy to pure neoprene doesn't really exist.
- 18:3618:36, 6 May 2024 diff hist −404 Neoprene →Other: Remove "extreme CPU overclocking" which was uncited and honestly such a stupidly niche use that it shouldn't be mentioned inline with normal uses. Remove link to a spammy and now dead fashion blog, probably self-inserted and not worth pulling from webarchive.
5 May 2024
- 17:1617:16, 5 May 2024 diff hist −1 Plaxico Burress →Accidental shooting: Triggers are pulled, not "pressed". Pedantic but pointed out because it would be almost impossible to reach around the trigger guard and apply enough pressure to the trigger in the same direction as gravity, while accidental pulls are a matter of poor gun safety but I've seen experienced hunters do some mind-numbingly stupid stuff with the same results
22 April 2024
- 07:4107:41, 22 April 2024 diff hist −45 Eutectic bonding →References: one more dead "agency" parameter
- 07:4107:41, 22 April 2024 diff hist −31 Eutectic bonding →References: Remove dead cite parameter
- 07:4007:40, 22 April 2024 diff hist −434 Eutectic bonding Nuke uncited "technical specifications" table which didn't contain any technical specifications, cleanup lead, add cleanup tags
- 07:1907:19, 22 April 2024 diff hist −32 Eutectic bonding →Pre-treatment: Remove my new nominee for most incoherent sentence in all of history. Correct Hz to KHz, 60Hz isn't ultrasonic, it's bass. Change pidgin 3rd century German grammar to English.
- 07:1607:16, 22 April 2024 diff hist +161 Krypton hexafluoride →History: Get rid of random info about KrF2 that felt like padding
- 07:1207:12, 22 April 2024 diff hist −535 Krypton hexafluoride →History: Get rid of non-sequitor about properties of krypton difluoride which either didn't belong here or was phrased badly enough that I missed the connection.
21 April 2024
- 04:3004:30, 21 April 2024 diff hist +1,248 Talk:Carbaryl →banned: Reply Tag: Reply
- 04:1904:19, 21 April 2024 diff hist −748 Cyhalothrin →Agriculture: Get rid of the dual lessons on marketing and "how capitalism / business management works" which aren't specific to this insecticide (or anything a farm needs to buy, really); aside from all of that it ignored that farms are too important to be allowed to tank from a poor insecticide choice, so subsidies end up making all of it irrelevant in this very specific market.
- 03:5803:58, 21 April 2024 diff hist +458 Talk:Carbaryl →1976: Reply Tag: Reply