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GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 10:57, 2 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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  • Fine

Lead

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  • "Prior, David had primarily been a YouTuber" → She is still a Youtuber right? Because it seems like she gave up that career when reading this
She is no longer a YouTuber. She occasionally posts there, but she's considered a rapper now.
  • "on what observers categorized as pop rap and R&B songs" → observers? Who are these observers?
reworded.
  • "It was certified platinum in Germany and Austria, and "On Off" also received gold in the aforementioned countries." → remove, this is already on the body of the article and it is just too much here.
  • Commercially, Supersize was successful → in German-speaking countries

 Done

Background and release

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  • "The following day, Universal Music Group released a CD for €17,99 and Vertigo Berlin issued a box set for €49,99" → The prices are irrelevant information. The following day, Universal Music Group released a CD and Vertigo Berlin issued a box set.
  • About the cover art, showing David → Regarding the cover art, which shows David

 Done

Music and lyrics

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  • pop rap and R&B → pop rap and R&B genres
  • and have her adopting the role → can you rephrase this?
  • talking about empowerment... → addressing themes of empowerment
  • An editor of VIP.de noticed lyrical connections between "Ice" and "Gib Ihm", calling the former a continuation of the latter. → this should be above, right after describing the tracks

 Done

Critical reception

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  • Could you please put first the favorable reviews, then the average and ultimately the unfavorable ones?
I didn't do this because we literally have three reviews in total. Would we have around 1000 like in high-profile music articles, then this sort-out would be helpful, but here I think it is not.
  • Mix1 has too many little starts, put it only in the prose
I removed it overall, I came to the conclusion that this isn't too necessary.

 Done

Promotion and commercial performance

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  • "Gib Ihm" notably broke → "Gib Ihm" broke
  • at the Wireless Germany festival, but eventually cancelled the gig → but the gig was canceled + no reason was given?
Unfortunately no.
  • was a commercial success → was a commercial success in German-speaking countries
  • German albums charts → wikilink
  • first one by a German solo female → first by a German solo female
  • and is also the first one by a → same as previous

 Done

Track listing

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 Done

Charts

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  • The "German Hip Hop Albums (Offizielle Top 100)" should redirect to GfK Entertainment hip hop albums chart.

 Done

Release history

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  • Fine

Notes

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  • Fine

References

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  • Source 12, 13, 14, 16 25, 26, 45, 46 and 47 missing author even if they are staff
I believe I have everything done here.
Ref 46 red is the author and on 47 is Agnes W. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:22, 4 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, though 'red' stands for 'Redaktion', which means staff; added that.
  • A source check has been conducted on the references mentioned above

Overall

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  • Regarding the Deustch wikilinks, I was thinking something like this FNSHRS. [de]. Of course, only wikilink once in the body of the article
I ended up removing all links overall. There's too much red if we do this, and it doesn't really look good.
  • Seven days. Let me know once you are done.
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you for your review! I have responded to some of your comments. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:34, 4 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Cartoon network freak Only missed two references. Everything else seems great, I will pass it after you fix those references if you are ok with that. Please let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:39, 4 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
MarioSoulTruthFan Everything done. Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:29, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]