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This is the current revision of this page, as edited by Colum52 (talk | contribs) at 14:26, 26 April 2023 (Created page with '{{dashboard.wikiedu.org peer review/guide}} == General info == ; Whose work are you reviewing? Munzira ; Link to draft you're reviewing ; User:Munzira/Shein (company) : ; Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) : Shein == Evaluate the drafted changes == Some of the initial edits are unclear about what has changed. I can't tell what is different about environmental health issues. The new paragraph for the human rights violati...'). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this version.

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Munzira

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Munzira/Shein (company)
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Shein

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Some of the initial edits are unclear about what has changed. I can't tell what is different about environmental health issues. The new paragraph for the human rights violation seems much clearer and helps state how devastating these violations are which the article didn't capture. I think you need to include your citations. The examples provided are excellent but they need to be backed up.