AUDITEUR

Utilisateur anonyme

  • 2
  • commentaires
  • 1
  • vote utile
  • 2
  • évaluations

Meaty Stuff!

Au global
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Histoire
5 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2020-10-30

Funny, poignant, profound... It's got a bit of everything. An interesting take on belief. It's also got quite a bit of Wikipedia fodder in it. I learned a lot about world religions as a result. I was immediately drawn in by the story. Multiple actors in the performance were a big bonus.

Un problème est survenu. Veuillez réessayer dans quelques minutes.

Vous avez donné votre avis sur cette évaluation.

Vous avez donné votre avis sur cette évaluation.

1 personne a trouvé cela utile

Was this a first draft?

Au global
2 out of 5 stars
Performance
4 out of 5 stars
Histoire
2 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2020-10-22

This recording creates an intriguing dichotomy of a dumpster fire of sophomoric dialogue read by a Shakespearean actor. It's supposed to be a quasi medieval fantasy, but the prose is pedestrian and infantile, liberally salted with contemporary idioms, cliches, and mixed metaphors. Granted, it has an engaging storyline. But it feels like the author started writing this in junior high, and finished it in adulthood after digesting some more mature literature, failing to polish up the manuscript with a second draft and the fresh eyes of a proper editor.

I had to stop listening in the middle of the fifth chapter. The account of his study of sex magic and the tryst with a female mage was embarrassingly cringeworthy. The women in this story are either mothers or objects of desire, and when they do have power or importance, their character is overshadowed by their sexual appeal. The protagonist's dialogue with other characters betrays the author's unfamiliarity with genuine human interactions. I think there might have been some attempts at humor here, but it was the sort produced by those who lack any understanding of wit.

It feels like it truly wants to be somewhere in the vicinity of Harry Potter and A Song Of Ice And Fire. It's not even in the same time zone. I really wanted to like this, as it was highly recommended by a friend. It was a challenge to get through, but alas, I failed.

Un problème est survenu. Veuillez réessayer dans quelques minutes.

Vous avez donné votre avis sur cette évaluation.

Vous avez donné votre avis sur cette évaluation.