User contributions for Free State Mom 1
A user with 43 edits. Account created on 22 November 2022.
24 November 2022
- 04:2404:24, 24 November 2022 diff hist −5 m Marva Collins →Westside Preparatory School Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2404:24, 24 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Marva Collins →Westside Preparatory School Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2104:21, 24 November 2022 diff hist +6 Alice Vassar LaCour →Personal life and legacy: Broke the first sentence down into three separate, shorter sentences to help the paragraph read better. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1904:19, 24 November 2022 diff hist −1 m Alice Vassar LaCour →Career Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1604:16, 24 November 2022 diff hist +408 Talk:Patti J. Malone →Birth year: new section Tag: New topic
- 04:1204:12, 24 November 2022 diff hist +1 Sheila Andrews →Personal life: Took out the word fatal in the first sentence of the second paragraph because it was redundant. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1004:10, 24 November 2022 diff hist +27 Sheila Andrews →1979–1981: What I Had With You and Lovesick: Added a link to the Wikipedia article on Billboard magazine. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0804:08, 24 November 2022 diff hist −6 Sheila Andrews →Biography: Rearranged the third sentence in the second paragraph to make it more concise. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4403:44, 24 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Big Mama Thornton →Style Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4103:41, 24 November 2022 diff hist −6 Big Mama Thornton →Success: Reworked the second sentence in the fourth paragraph to make it more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3603:36, 24 November 2022 diff hist +5 Big Mama Thornton →Early career: Added the word "over" before "three" to indicate that it was almost four years after Big Mama Thornton recorded "Hound Dog" that Elvis Presley recorded a version of the song. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3003:30, 24 November 2022 diff hist −6 Eunice Hutto →Biography: In the third paragraph, I took out an unnecessary word and reworked the last sentence to make it more readable. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1202:12, 24 November 2022 diff hist +2 Daffney →Death: Changed verbs from plural to singular to match the collective nouns they were used with. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0602:06, 24 November 2022 diff hist −4 Daffney →Singles competition (2010–2011): Hyphenated a two-word adjective and removed an unnecessary word. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5901:59, 24 November 2022 diff hist +1 m Daffney →World Championship Wrestling (1999–2001) Tag: Visual edit
- 01:0801:08, 24 November 2022 diff hist −1 m Anne Braden →Personal life and death Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5700:57, 24 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Recy Taylor →Aftermath Tag: Visual edit
23 November 2022
- 20:1720:17, 23 November 2022 diff hist +23 Recy Taylor Took out Golden Globe before the award's name because the awards show name had already been mentioned earlier in the sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1503:15, 23 November 2022 diff hist +6 Vernon and Irene Castle →Life without Vernon: Corrected a verb tense issue and created a link to the Wikipedia article on Lew Fields. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1203:12, 23 November 2022 diff hist +12 Vernon and Irene Castle →World War I: Vernon's death: Added link to Wikipedia article on World War I Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1103:11, 23 November 2022 diff hist −2 m Vernon and Irene Castle →Rise to fame Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0703:07, 23 November 2022 diff hist −2 m Norris Johnson No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0603:06, 23 November 2022 diff hist −3 m Christine Mayo →Biography: Took a character's name out of italicized type. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0403:04, 23 November 2022 diff hist −1 Christine Mayo →Biography: In the second paragraph, changed the verb tense to past. Removed italics in some areas and changed to type enclosed in double quotes. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5302:53, 23 November 2022 diff hist −6 m Anna Dodge No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4702:47, 23 November 2022 diff hist +12 Carmen Phillips →Biography: Spelled out California and created a link to the Wikipedia article about Monrovia, California. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4402:44, 23 November 2022 diff hist +22 Margaret Loomis Denishawn School was misspelled. Also created link to Wikipedia article about the school. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4202:42, 23 November 2022 diff hist +16 Lillian Leighton No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4002:40, 23 November 2022 diff hist −4 m Marguerite Clark →Death Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3502:35, 23 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Margaret McWade →Career Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3402:34, 23 November 2022 diff hist +1 Margaret McWade →Career: Created link to Wikipedia article regarding the 1936 film "Mr. Deeds Goes to Town" and corrected some punctuation errors to help it match an earlier paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2902:29, 23 November 2022 diff hist +13 Vola Vale →Serious Actress: Lorna Doone was referenced as a character, not a novel in this instance and, therefore, should not have been italicized. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:2500:25, 23 November 2022 diff hist −1 m Estelle Taylor →Marriages Tag: Visual edit
- 00:2200:22, 23 November 2022 diff hist +33 Estelle Taylor →Broadway debut and Fox (1919–1922) Tag: Visual edit
22 November 2022
- 23:5123:51, 22 November 2022 diff hist +2 m Edith Roberts (actress) →Career Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1823:18, 22 November 2022 diff hist +391 Talk:Vera Steadman →Discrepancy in her age within article: new section Tag: New topic
- 23:1323:13, 22 November 2022 diff hist +210 Vera Steadman Hopefully, added reference to her burial spot correctly this time. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0523:05, 22 November 2022 diff hist −70 Vera Steadman No edit summary Tag: references removed
- 23:0123:01, 22 November 2022 diff hist +45 Vera Steadman Hopefully added reference to Vera Steadman's burial site. Tag: extraneous markup
- 22:5522:55, 22 November 2022 diff hist +5 Vera Steadman Created a link to the Wikipedia Article for Van Nuys, California and added a comma.
- 22:5222:52, 22 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Laura La Plante →Later career: Changed the placement of an apostrophe in Brothers to represent the plural form of the word.
- 22:4622:46, 22 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Kathryn Adams (actress, born 1893) →Early years: Added a comma and changed a word in the last sentence of the paragraph to make the sentence correct. current
- 22:4522:45, 22 November 2022 diff hist 0 Kathryn Adams (actress, born 1893) →Early years: Changed the spelling of her middle name to match how it is spelled elsewhere within the article. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
