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23:2123:21, 19 July 2024 diff hist +374‎ Talk:Attempted assassination of Donald Trump ‎ →‎Sloped roof comment by Secret Service Director Kimberly Cheatle: support, with rationale
23:0223:02, 19 July 2024 diff hist −1,047‎ Natalie Dreyfuss ‎ remove unsourced
16:0716:07, 19 July 2024 diff hist +158‎ Oren Cass ‎ move some detail about one part of Cass' career out of the lede and into the article body where that particular job is covered; copyedit current
11:1111:11, 19 July 2024 diff hist −41‎ Oren Cass ‎ →‎top: source supports only the former of the two descriptors
01:2601:26, 19 July 2024 diff hist −1,098‎ Mark Halperin ‎ →‎Career: removed unsourced; need verifiable sources for specific quotations

01:5701:57, 17 July 2024 diff hist +17‎ Craig Steven Wright ‎ clarify time context per historical source from 2019

17:4917:49, 15 July 2024 diff hist +11‎ Aileen Cannon ‎ →‎top: needs clarification
12:1612:16, 15 July 2024 diff hist +31‎ N Autumn Blaze maple ‎ new redir to existing article, with citations current Tags: New redirect Uncategorized redirect

23:5623:56, 13 July 2024 diff hist +2‎ Attempted assassination of Donald Trump ‎ →‎Aftermath: New York (Trump residence) is relevant; but it is not the same topic as the previous paragraph
23:5523:55, 13 July 2024 diff hist +7‎ Attempted assassination of Donald Trump ‎ →‎Aftermath: let's explicate for our global readers

14:5314:53, 12 July 2024 diff hist +280‎ List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ →‎Launch history: press kits are not good sources for post-launch actuals
14:4714:47, 12 July 2024 diff hist +157‎ List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ →‎Rocket configurations: not sure we should be showing speculative data with actual statistics
14:3914:39, 12 July 2024 diff hist +5‎ Talk:List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ →‎Is this a List article? or prose?: tweak
13:4013:40, 12 July 2024 diff hist +982‎ Talk:List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ →‎Is this a List article? or prose? or both?: new section Tags: Disambiguation links added New topic
13:2913:29, 12 July 2024 diff hist +17‎ List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ the vast amount of prose on the most recent Ariane launch is clearly not std list material; perhaps better placed in another Wikipedia article somewhere, or in a prose section of this article
13:1813:18, 12 July 2024 diff hist +6‎ List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ →‎2023: not seeing this in a source in this article
02:5702:57, 12 July 2024 diff hist +34‎ Ariane 6 ‎ →‎Description: minor copyedit; needs a source
02:5502:55, 12 July 2024 diff hist +118‎ Ariane 6 ‎ →‎top: clarify time context of an objective; needs updated as to how it is now measuring up against that earlier design objective

14:2414:24, 11 July 2024 diff hist +24‎ 2024 United States Senate election in Massachusetts ‎ time context clarification is needed; unclear when these events take place

23:0223:02, 10 July 2024 diff hist +629‎ Etherloop ‎ →‎Applications: update on how an up-versioned Etherloop is planned also in the Tesla next-generation vehicle, with citation current
03:5303:53, 10 July 2024 diff hist +807‎ Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Spaceflight ‎ →‎Date format: cmt
03:4003:40, 10 July 2024 diff hist −803‎ Tesla Cybertruck ‎ →‎top: remove from infobox that which is not supported in article prose, per WP:MOSINFOBOX
03:3303:33, 10 July 2024 diff hist +2‎ Tesla Cybertruck ‎ →‎2019 concept: clarify time context for the article about towing capacity, which was not a part of the concept unveiling in November 2019
00:5800:58, 10 July 2024 diff hist +8‎ P120 (rocket stage) ‎ →‎P120C+: ce
00:5600:56, 10 July 2024 diff hist +27‎ P120 (rocket stage) ‎ →‎top: there is no source provided for the statement about being the largest/most-powerful SRM
00:5400:54, 10 July 2024 diff hist +39‎ P120 (rocket stage) ‎ →‎top: copyedit
00:5000:50, 10 July 2024 diff hist +6‎ List of Ariane launches (2020–2029) ‎ indefinite article since the link goes to a generalized description of what APUs are, not to a particular Ariane 6 APU

14:0014:00, 6 July 2024 diff hist +39‎ Tesla Cybertruck ‎ →‎top: ce
13:5113:51, 6 July 2024 diff hist +127‎ Tesla Cybertruck ‎ →‎Cargo bed: it needs a better source; it may or may not need an update to the prose, depending on what secondary sources are reporting about the cargo bed now that we are in mid-2024; minor copyedit
13:4213:42, 6 July 2024 diff hist +50‎ Tesla Cybertruck ‎ →‎Mid-voltage electrical system: need better sources, use of primary sources should be extremely limited or not at all
12:0512:05, 6 July 2024 diff hist +247‎ Talk:Tesla Cybertruck ‎ auto archive the older Talk content
11:5311:53, 6 July 2024 diff hist +1,046‎ Talk:Tesla Cybertruck ‎ →‎True low voltage E/E architecture: 48V AND 12V: cmt; good source now available
03:2303:23, 6 July 2024 diff hist +7‎ Hurricane Beryl ‎ →‎Meteorological history: clarify geolocation for our global readers
00:0100:01, 6 July 2024 diff hist +209‎ Hurricane Beryl ‎ →‎Mexico: needs time context to clarify the prose

23:3423:34, 5 July 2024 diff hist +157‎ Hurricane Beryl ‎ →‎top: lede should clarify, for our many global readers, that the weakening of Berryl is substantive, now down to just a Cat1 or Tropical Storm once again