User contributions for PSWG1920
A user with 5,579 edits. Account created on 22 January 2008.
16 August 2015
2 May 2015
- 05:2205:22, 2 May 2015 diff hist −43 Behavioral optometry →top: Removing disputed source, and language which is only found in that source. This may need more work.
1 May 2015
29 April 2015
- 06:1706:17, 29 April 2015 diff hist −64 Behavioral optometry →top: Removing sweeping statements, and changing awkward wording
28 April 2015
27 April 2015
- 18:5118:51, 27 April 2015 diff hist −163 Behavioral optometry →top: Removing sweeping statements which are very misleading if one only reads the intro. Slightly tougher wording than my previous attempt.
- 05:0505:05, 27 April 2015 diff hist +542 Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion: Lede
- 02:0702:07, 27 April 2015 diff hist −150 Behavioral optometry →top: Better summary of article and sources
26 April 2015
- 16:3616:36, 26 April 2015 diff hist +499 User talk:PSWG1920 →"Libel"
- 07:3007:30, 26 April 2015 diff hist +410 User talk:PSWG1920 →"Libel"
- 05:1405:14, 26 April 2015 diff hist +364 Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion
- 01:0201:02, 26 April 2015 diff hist +1 m Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion
- 01:0101:01, 26 April 2015 diff hist +394 Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion
25 April 2015
- 19:5619:56, 25 April 2015 diff hist −212 Behavioral optometry →top: Novella blog is not RS for such a sweeping statement, and the other source does not totally support this statement
- 18:5018:50, 25 April 2015 diff hist +368 Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion
- 15:2015:20, 25 April 2015 diff hist 0 m Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →top: Updating wikilink
- 15:1615:16, 25 April 2015 diff hist −225 Behavioral optometry →top: Wording contradicts the end of the first section, which says this approach is at least useful for a few issues. Remaining paragraph makes the fringe aspect clear.
31 March 2015
- 18:4518:45, 31 March 2015 diff hist +11 Talk:Bates method I'm now thinking that this would be better
28 March 2015
- 08:1808:18, 28 March 2015 diff hist +597 Talk:Bates method →Unsubstantiated vs. ineffective
- 08:0008:00, 28 March 2015 diff hist +613 Talk:Bates method →Unsubstantiated vs. ineffective
- 07:1007:10, 28 March 2015 diff hist +561 Talk:Bates method →Unsubstantiated vs. ineffective
27 March 2015
- 23:0123:01, 27 March 2015 diff hist +510 Talk:Bates method →Unsubstantiated vs. ineffective
- 12:0612:06, 27 March 2015 diff hist +4 Bates method Trying again; tone should be impartial
- 05:1905:19, 27 March 2015 diff hist −32 Bates method →top: Actually this isn't really needed at all, since this basic point is established by the previous paragraph
26 March 2015
- 04:2804:28, 26 March 2015 diff hist −4 Bates method →top: Rather stringy sentence
- 04:2604:26, 26 March 2015 diff hist +6 Bates method →top: Trying to make the tone more impartial. Not perfect, but better than "because it is ineffective".
24 March 2015
- 12:2912:29, 24 March 2015 diff hist −16 Bates method →top
22 March 2015
- 21:2521:25, 22 March 2015 diff hist +44 Bates method →top
- 21:2221:22, 22 March 2015 diff hist +52 Bates method Mentioned below
17 October 2014
9 October 2014
- 18:5618:56, 9 October 2014 diff hist +218 Wikipedia talk:Avoid instruction creep →Nutshell
- 05:3405:34, 9 October 2014 diff hist +162 Wikipedia talk:Avoid instruction creep →Nutshell
- 05:2105:21, 9 October 2014 diff hist −31 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →top: More to the point
- 05:1305:13, 9 October 2014 diff hist +12 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →Prevention: There might be different interpretations of what policy allows
- 00:1200:12, 9 October 2014 diff hist +220 Wikipedia talk:Avoid instruction creep →Nutshell
7 October 2014
- 21:5321:53, 7 October 2014 diff hist +35 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →Prevention
- 14:5714:57, 7 October 2014 diff hist +3 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →Prevention
- 03:0603:06, 7 October 2014 diff hist +198 Wikipedia talk:Avoid instruction creep →Nutshell
6 October 2014
5 October 2014
- 21:0621:06, 5 October 2014 diff hist +394 Wikipedia talk:Avoid instruction creep →Nutshell: new section
- 18:4018:40, 5 October 2014 diff hist −30 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep Shorter nutshell, emphasizing understandability
11 September 2014
- 16:1716:17, 11 September 2014 diff hist −23 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →Misuse: Clarity is important
9 September 2014
- 15:1315:13, 9 September 2014 diff hist −84 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →Prevention: Simpler
24 August 2014
- 19:0919:09, 24 August 2014 diff hist −3 m Talk:Bates method →Book by optometrist
- 19:0619:06, 24 August 2014 diff hist +290 Talk:Bates method →Book by optometrist
26 May 2014
24 May 2014
19 April 2014
- 22:1622:16, 19 April 2014 diff hist +8 Talk:Bates method →New article?
- 22:1322:13, 19 April 2014 diff hist +700 Talk:Bates method →New article?: new section
21 March 2014
- 03:5803:58, 21 March 2014 diff hist +3 Bates method Updated
