Talk:Clavado en un Bar/GA2

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:24, 2 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

• Remove the mixing studio from the infobox, as that is different from recording
• Those studios should be in the parameter studios, not recorded
• Replace flastlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
• Per the body of the article, "additional recordings took place at Classic Recording Rentals, Conway Studios, and Mad Hatter Studios" → these should be added here as well

 Done

Lead[edit]

• who handled productions → who handled the production
• "charts in the United States." → charts, respectively.
• ""Clavado en un Bar"" was" → The song was
• "and peaked at number ten" → and his version peaked at number 10

 Done

Background and composition[edit]

• Sueños Líquidos → year of release in between brackets

 Done

Promotion and reception[edit]

• "A music video for the song was filmed that same year, which an editor from Billboard commented about: "Trying to forget someone? This is the perfect song for it!" → he commented about the song, not the video. Am I missing something here?
• Wikilink the Rolling Stones
• ASCAP → American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers (ASCAP) + wikilink
• José Alberto "El Canario" chart peaks should be added to the Charts section

 Done

Formats and track listings[edit]

• Use spaced en dash,  –

 Done

Charts[edit]

• Fine

References[edit]

• Wikilink Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 3
• Wikilin KXAS-TV on ref 11
• A source check has been conducted on references 2, 3, 11, 18, 20, 23, 24 and 27

 Done

Overall[edit]

• A personnel section is missing.
• Seven days to address these changes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:20, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  @MarioSoulTruthFan Thanks again for another review. Sorry the limited personnel, but I do not own the album booklet and from online, it's hard to get a clear picture of the personnel section. Could you help me with the formats and track listings? I am unclear on the formatting in regards to en dash. Erick (talk) 15:54, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  I did it on the personnel section, just copy from there. On the infobox remove the word studios from each studio MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:42, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

   Done Erick (talk) 20:10, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Some stuff is still missig I marked it with  Not done. Btw where is A&M studio, Conway...and the others that have no place? Some have some don't..I'm not expecting the casual reader to know where they are. Don't forget to wikilink the city, only the city. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:28, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Whoops, how about now? Erick (talk) 16:21, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Almost, see my last edit for the studios on the infobox. Do the same for the others. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:46, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Is Quinta Del Mar a place where it was recorded, this is a studio or not? The infobox, after you fixed, it says that Puerta Azul-Mobile is located in Quinta Del Mar, but the prose has "Quinta Del Mar" as a studio. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:40, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Yep, just noticed it and fixed it to studio name, not location name. Sorry about that! Erick (talk) 22:26, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Fine. I did some modifications to the article, see if you are ok with those MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:02, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  Yep! 👍 Erick (talk) 20:12, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]