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Hi. In the section titled "Management", the article reads like a "how to" guide and not an entry in an encyclopedia. The information is relevant but is communicated in an inappropriate tone. The citations are also incorrectly displayed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.245.202.176 (talk) 20:27, 22 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I would suggest providing citations throughout the article, supporting each statement as necessary. The list of references is very sparse and it isn't clear where you are getting your information. The citations on the Management section should also be altered, as the URLs should not be completely pasted in. I also suggest that more information could be given on the parental care of the larvae. ArndtH (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 04:28, 18 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]