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Jack Black

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  • There are inconsistent subheadings (one section has subheadings while all the rest do not).
  • There are several copyediting/grammar errors throughout
  • There is a need for improved citations

Christmas in Russia

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  • There are no sections for important themes like ‘history’ or ‘celebrations.’
  • There doesn’t seem to be a main focus, and there aren’t any subheadings.
  • Copyediting is needed, especially in the introduction.

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